I go through your manuscript and correct punctuation, usage, and grammar errors, following the Chicago Manual of Style. I also check for clarity of sentences, and will rearrange as needed. In addition, I make suggestions for improving pace and structure as needed.

Caveat: I'm not a "book doctor," and our editing agreement doesn't include rewriting to shore up shortcomings. I work with what is wrought by your mind, not mine, so it remains your book.

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Full edit & critique:

• Tightening the writing (you may see lots of adjectives and adverbs go away);
• Spelling;                        
• Sentence structure;
• Story flow & pace, rooting out dead spots;
• Plot flaws, continuity inconsistencies;
• Character development;   
• Transitions;
• Use of active voice;
• Proper word usage;
• Clarity and "weak" word choices;
• Subject/verb agreement;
• Overuse of words or characters
• Redundancies.
• Coaching & instruction on writing craft.

I'll note additions, deletions, and direction on your manuscript. I may suggest that you move sentences, paragraphs, sections or even chapters. It's likely you'll see suggested deletions  to enhance story and pace.

2. I print out and go through the manuscript line by line a second time, tightening the editing and looking for anything missed. In some cases, I've restructured the novel--I do it for you, not just telling you it needs to be done. You can then accept, work with, or reject the structure I suggest.

3. Then I write a critique letter detailing my thoughts on your manuscript. If I've found a flaw in plotting or structure, I'll do my best to suggest a solution — but only as a starter thought for you to then apply your unique talent and perspective to solving the problem your way. My goal is your well-told book. All comments are aimed at achieving that goal. It is, of course, entirely up to you to agree and adopt or disagree and discard.

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